高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；文章能较灵活使用词汇，学术词汇有些少，还需注意个别拼写错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

With the rapidly development of our society, My hometown has a greatly changed for those years. When I was a child , there were many kinds of green trees around there. Also, water was very clear in the river, thus, a lot of fishes enjoy their life freely. Although house was a bit small and road was narrow, people still had to work hard in poor conditions to improve their life. Several years has passed, you can find the original appearence of the little country. Instead, many high building stands everywhere, and also many kinds of car running on the street. Unforturnately, we can't see fishes in river for water became dirty. Urgently, people realized that the living environment isn't siutable for us to live if no measure taken to protect it.