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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13038
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分61.0分
评语:

文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;文章词汇表达多样性不足,不过词汇拼写要再接再厉;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Comunication Is the Most Important As it saying,the earth becomes a valiage.everyday,peoples are faced all kinds of informations from the world.the only way done somethings well obliged us to keep in touch with others deeply. comunication is the most dayworks for us. Firstly,we can't only learn the customer's needs but also deal with matters when somethings is wrong in time by gond comunications. in this way , we can spend smallest money to get biggest customer's satisfaction. Secondly,it will improve our team's competive through enough comunications,smooth the relaions of the fellow,prevent from some mistakes which shouid be avoided,all in all,we united as one person.

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