2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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education From the date ,we know that education pays is related to higher earning and lower unemployment rates .From the table ,we know the unemployment rate is lower with the higher education pays.Without the high school diploma ,we know the unemployment rate in 2011 is 14.1%.At the,we can r unemployment earning in 2011.The earnings for those who have doctor dl degree is nearly the three times for those who only get the basic education pays.In a word,we must accept the fact that thethough,most person without education pays still hould realized that knowledge is always good for you.