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2011年专四作文真题:私家车是否应该交污染税

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:50浏览次数:11765
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题目 Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?
说明 Recently government agencies in some big cities have been studying the possibility of putting a “pollution tax” on private cars. The amount of private car owners would depend on the emission levels, i.e. engine or vehicle size. This has caused quite a stir among the public. Some regard it as an effective way to control of the number of cars and reduce pollution in the city. But others don’t think so. What’s your opinion? Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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In recent years,with the development of economy and technology.There are a large number of people have their own private cars.At the same time,debating of should limit the number of private car is more and more stronger.In my opinions,private car owners should be taxed for pollution so as to reduce the environmental problems. Why I make the conclusion?There are some of my reasons.First,the problems of traffic and environment in the city is serious,it's result in the number of private car continuously increase.And the quality of people's life is being decreased.Second,there are more and more car accidents happen because of drinking,and a lot of people lost their life because of that.So private car owners become taxers of pollution is a good way to avoid this tragedy.Finally,this policy can effectively support the development of public transportation,which contributes to achieve the green life. All in all,in order to solve the problems of pollution and traffic,it is necessary to control of the number of cars.Private car owners be taxed for pollution that will have a good influence on social development.

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