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There is no doubt that we are living in a fast developing age, in which there are some problems especially for environment as well. Some people feel afraid we don’t have access to solve these, while others believe there must be some measures to balance between both economic development and ecosystem balance. Though the problem is hard to solve, it can not wait until the problem getting worse.To begin with, it really provides with us great convenience because of the invention of modern transportations including cars, motorcycles and jet planes as well, we are now able to take a long distance journey within one day. Some breakthroughs like steam engine and electronic, which are still widely used today, has been making a significant difference to human life compared with 200 years ago. All the technologies and innovations aim to promote a better life standard, however, without effective control, they may pose a threaten to our homeland, earth. For example, first, excessive exploration for mine and coal leads to serious water loss and soil erosion, decreasing the land for agriculture. Second, as the numbers trees are cutted and large amount of fuel using are making our earth warm and warm. What’s more, human beings’ activity is the main cause of some species extinction, all of these species make up compose of a balanced ecosystem. From my personal view, the route of all problems like global warming, species extinction is overpopulation, we should take measures to solve these questions,it’s encourged for government and media should call for the importance of environment protection. For individuals, what we should to do is keep it in mind nothing is too simple, we are supposed to do our best to protect our beautiful family. So in a nutshell, only if ones desire can be controled properly, we can make a clean and clearer world!
