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文中学术词汇使用较少，但单词拼写做的很棒；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
When the winter comes, Soapy set about finding a warm and comfortable place to spend the cold winter. After consideration, three months on the Island was what he desired. Therefore, he has done a seizes of things such as dashing a cobblestone through a shops glass, eating in a restaurant without pay and so on. What he did was in order to be caught by the cop. Only in this way can he accomplish his desire to go to the Island. However, he always ended in failure. Suddenly, he saw an old church in a corner. The anthem in the church aroused Soapy, which made him want to change himself. He made up his mind to become an useful person. At this moment, he was arrested by the cop and sent to the Island for three months. Reading the story, I feel regretful. Because when Soapy made a decision to change himself, he was additionally caught by the cop, which was a strong desire for him in the previous. As for me, I think it is a big pity for Soapy. If he could pull himself out of the mire as soon as possible, he would not be arrested. As a matter of fact, many people may face the same situation like Soapy. When they make up their mind to change their lives, but it is too late to begin. So we ought to make the right target of the life as soon as possible. Otherwise，it is easy for us to make a false choice.
