小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good friend has long hair ,two big eyes ,She is little fat ,She is smart and friendly .I am very like my good friend .We often help each other ,learning togetger.We like dear sisters, follow like a shadow .We have the same hobby, we all like to eat potatoes.