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字数：300 满分：100分
作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
As a student, we get a monthly money from our parents. We use money on buying books or eatting lunch. We always make a plane to how to economically spend our money. However some other student think the way of saving money is not as a smart comsuer . As I as concern, i think I am favor of economically spend our money. ate First.as a college student, it's a shame for us ask for money from parents. Parents are not easy to afford our expenditure on our college. Second, Saving money is our traditional moral in our country. Many people spend too much in his youth, so they find that money is not enough when they are old. In coulsion , money is not easy to earning. We can buy the goods we like depenable on our real situation. It's not critism to spend money, but saving money is crucial.
