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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13024
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题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分84.5分
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用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

The story says that the leprosy patient whose disease can be healed by drinking the water of the pool expected to get the help from other people all the time. Then, he was told that he shouldn’t have found reason for no action to defend himself, and he stood up, went to the water edge, drank some water and got healed. The story might not be true, but it conveys profound messages. Firstly, action is more important than intention. After establishing the goals and making a plan, one should immediately act actively instead of intention. Only action can turn fantastic dream into realistic brilliance. Secondly, all things require your effort rather than depending on other people. So, the well-known proverb “God helps those who help themselves” has long been accepted by all of us. Thirdly, difficulties such as growing old, sickness, natural disasters are the part of what it means to be human. The true intelligent person can not only confront the trying circumstance but also be charge of themselves by overcoming the difficulties. To sum up, in order to achieving our anticipated results, we should attach importance to the action, depending on ourselves, confronting difficulties bravely.

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