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In 1908, there was anonymous college students raised the well-known three questions about Olympic which was printed in newspaper Tianjing Youth: when will Chinese athlete participate in Olympics? When will Chinese athlete win an Olympic golden medal? When will China host an Olympic Game? Until 2008, China has spent totally 100 years to realize her Olympic dream and gave a satisfying answer to it. Nowadays the competition for the international events from World Championship to Olympic Games becomes much more fierce than ever before. Nevertheless, hosting sporting events just likes a coin with two sides—benefits and drawbacks. Obviously one of the main purposes of winning the right to host large sporting games is that an international event can bring huge financial profit for the host city. The preparation for an international matches just likes a “high-profit investment”—the government pours a certain amount of money into different fields but gain more from them, and these industries will still flourish for a long time in post-event period. Take the Beijing Olympic Games for example, some critics accused the authority of investing too much money for the event, but the skyrocketed profit during 2008 completely covered over the cost government had put in during the past 7 years. In addition to the high-profit, hosting an international sport event is a perfect opportunity for Chinese government to solve the hiding problems which exist in society for a long time. One typical case is the environment protection in Beijing city—government moved the oldest iron manufactory out of city town to coastal area under the heartless. As a result, the air quality during Olympic Games reached the best place in 30 years since the industrialization of Beijing last century. Not everything is perfect, so does hosting an international event. The increasing pressure on security, flood of population, more traffic jams than ever before…all these are headaches for the government of each Olympic Games host city. The large-scale event gathers people of different nations, races, religions together to build a communication bridge, also provides the hotbed for terrorist to create chaos. In a nutshell, the advantages of hosting an international race outweigh its dark side. The potential risk that these events could possibly bring about, however, still needs effective solutions.
