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Will E-books Replace Traditional Books Along with the step of the development of techonology,more and more E-books are occupied in our daily life. Owing to this situation,there is a hit topic among people.Will E-books replace the traditional books? Some people's answer is positive.What they think it is an absolutely tendency that the traditional books can be taken place by E-books.To begin with,with the development of modern techonology,more and more people rely on the techonological products,like mobile phone and computer,which sitimulate the boom of E-books.Besides,it is convenient to read E-books and carry them everywhere compared with those heavy traditional books. Last but not leaset,based on the environmental point,the E-books are more environment friendly. As far as I am concerned,although the E-books poccess a lot of advantages, the traditional books are not able to be replaced totally.Reading the traditional book is a health activity without electronic devices.Furthermore, the texture of traditional books is uniqe.