可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Recently, the phenomenon of ignoring the study of Chinese appreaing in campus. Which showed that the interests of the students are not in studing Chinese word, poem or prose. Why did the attention are not paid to the study of Chinese? What is the main factors distract the students' s attention? As far as I am concerned, the reasons are as follows. Firstly, the study of Chinese seems too easy for the Chinese students, then the attention are paid to the difficult sbject, such as math, chemistry, and so on. Secondly, the English is more popular than Chinese in terms of more and more people planed to go abroad for study or work. And the advanced science and technology abroad may be the another reason. However, the Chinese word is the essential to every Chinese resident. Our country has long history of civilization, amount of preminent culture are waiting for us to learn and broadcast. So, they could not be a great Chinese without learn the Chinese knowledge hard.