文中词汇多样性稍有欠缺,单词拼写也要更仔细;采用了一些简单的从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Noadays, there are more cities opening the museums on free in order to let more people know about the antiques.Children can learn more about our acient times. But there are also some pobelms wth it. Some people don't respect them and even destroyed them,which is a bad phenomenon. In my opinion, we should protect our museums and this is each our's responsibility.