小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my good friend is xiaobo he is a good parson he is very clever he is my classmate we are all like playing basketball he play it is very good so he is my good friend his mother is a teacher so he is a handsome boy he likes playing the compurter game but he is very clever i like him very much so he is my good good friend