小学二年级英语作文:My pet

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I have a new pet, It is a dog,It is mingming. It is one years old, It is culd, It has shout legs,dig eyes and long ears.It every samll ,It has a shout tail. It is every likes eat bone,It is like run. Sometimes,It is like play ball. I am very like my pot. 我有一个新的宠物。它是条狗，叫明明。它一岁大，很可爱。它有一双短腿，大大的眼睛和长长的耳朵。它很小，有一条短短的尾巴。它很喜欢吃骨头，很爱跑。有时，它喜欢玩球。我非常喜欢我的宠物。