加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;文中词汇表达丰富度要加强,同时要注意单词拼写;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
From:Tomsmith@hotmail.com date:jun.10th to:john@163.com dear john: i'm tom,fox electronic comply sales department manageor. i want to chat with you about new product .we need talk about the launch date of the new product and advertising campaign. please reprent at jun,20rid. i'm expecting to extabilish business relationship forever. i'm looking forward to your early reply! yours senserly. tom