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Recently,the speech of Cai Jing is eye-catching, which tell us an amazing news that we are almost the victims of the haze.Actually ,the haze is one kind of air pollution.It is well-known that the air is becoming more and more terrible in several decade.Therefore we have to attach importance to that issue. There are several reasons that cause the air pollution.Of course the fuels has the most proportion and then the vehicle exhaust is also one of the reasons and so on.So according what bring about the bad air,we could do something to ease the air pollution pressure.Firstly,for the government,making a law to rule a number of fuel air which the factory can produce ,and it is also significant to plant more trees which can absorb harmful gas.Then,for the factory which can buy some air cleaner.Finally,it is for ourselves,we can on foot or take bus more instead of driving car when we go out,. To be honest ,the air pollution is not just harmful to some people,every breath the same gas so we should try to solve that problem in one word and build a better earth.