Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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As we all know the education play a important role in our life ,with the develepment of society,education become more importantly. We can see this point in this picture. In this picture we can clear that as the people educational level higher ,the median earnings are hidher ,the unemployment rate are lower