注意:
1.电子邮件的格式已为你写好。
2.词数:100词左右。
作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,对拼写检查也要重视;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
I am lihua from China,i notice the notice that you want make friends with the chinese from the internet.And i am so glad that i could be your friend.Then we can talk about the culture of my country.Besides,you can learn chinese by chatting with me.At the same time,i also can learn from you about your culture and language. Hope your writing back.