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In recent years,with the development of economy,the standard of live is increasely improved.As a result of that,travel has became a good way for people to spend their spare time.Someone thinks it's an opportunity to urge the tourism to develop.But I do not agree with that.The reason why I don't appreciate this view is that I think tourism will bring harm to environment. Why I said tourism will bring harm to environment?The reason is obviously and here are some of mine.To begin with,so many primitive places will be destoried in order to build some entertainment facilities or some tourist attractions.For example,we often can heard some news about the ancient wall or houses were tear down to give way to railway or raod.Besides,a lot of precious plant were disappear because people activities.Furthermore,a part of tourists are never pay attention to the environmental protection.They left litters anywhere and worte some words or drawn pictures on the buildings,which have a terrible influence on the sightseeing places. In brife,the tourism business will contributes to the economic growth,but it also bring too much disadvantages to the environment.For long time,people will lost a lot because of tour.
