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拼写做的很棒，学术词汇可适量增加；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
In recent years,with the development of economy,the standard of live is increase improved.As a result of that,travel has became a good way for people to spend their spare time.Someone thinks it's an opportunity to urge the tourism to develop.But I do not agree with that.The reason why I don't appreciate this view is that I think tourism will bring harm to the environment. Why I said tourism will bring harm to the environment?The reason is obviously and here are some of mine.To begin with,so many primitive places will be destroyed in order to build some entertainment facilities or some tourist attractions.For example,we often can heard some news from others that's about the ancient wall or houses were tear down in order to set up railway or road.Besides,much rarely plants were disappear because of people's activities.Furthermore,a part of tourists are never pay attention to the environmental protection.They left litters anywhere and wrote some words or drawn pictures on the buildings,which have a terrible influence on the sightseeing places. In brief,the tourism business will contributes to the economic growth,but it also bring too much harm to the environment.For long time,people will lost a lot because of tour.
