3、这种现象可能产生的影响
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1995 2000 2005
1万人 近4万 12万以上
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The prosperous stiuation of tourism As shown in the graph above, there are 10000 tourists go to travel in1995,while about 40000 tourists in 2000 and beyond 120000 tourists in the year of 2005.According to these statistics,there is a increasing tendency about the number of tourism. In the recent decades,there are more and more people are fond on travelling. There are numerous factors accounting for this phenomenon,but the following might be dispensible ones.First and foremost,the level of living is improving continually which offer the beneficial advantage to people to travel around the place they love.Besides,with the development of tourism,the better and better tourism service contribute to people relish travelling.Last but not least,along with the globalization,it is convenient for people to travel all over the world. what a wonderful thing to poccess a enjoyable tour!However , with the increasing number of tourists,there are some prombles we are worth concerning.On the one hand,the crowd of people who will interfere with our good mood.On the other hand, some places and interest are destroyed.In view of these prombles,government should execute some effective measures to control the number of tourists.Furthermore,as a tourist ,we ought to shoulder the resposibility to protect the gorgeous spots and respect other tourists.