句法方面做的很棒,加强复杂句的使用;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
It's none too wise that get a conception immeditely when you see something or hear something.In my opinion,I think it was foolish that we have not thought all the thing what we have accepted but have a sense that is the consequence in our mind.We ignored the most important thing that is thinking.Thinking is an important process to understand someting.It involve searching information, choosing imformation,storing imformation,organizing imformation.There is an important course composed the thinking that according to our experience which in our memery to understand the new.We can get away from the mistaking by thought.
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