小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.She is so cute.She has a long black hair and beautiful eyes.She looks like a star in my heart,because she is not only a beauty,but also nice character. She never mad at me,always be gentle.Beside,she like reading and singing.She has a good voice so she sings lovely.I love her very much.