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I have a good friend.She is taller than me,when i walk with she ,it looks like a mother and her child.It is funny,but i don't mind at all.Recently,she got married.Yes,i am so sad.Finaly,she belong to others.But i still give bless to her.After all,she is a girl who i love deely.