文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
I have a good friend.She is taller than me,when i walk with she,it looks like a mother and her child.It is funny,but i don't mind at all. We talk everything,never lie to each other.So many people are envious of us. Recently,she got married.Yes,i am so sad.Finaly,she belong to others.But i still bless to her.After all,she is a girl who i love deeply.