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2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:33浏览次数:1998
要求:
1、近十年来某城市越来越多人选择出去旅游 
2、出现这种现象的原因 

3、这种现象可能产生的影响 

表格:

1995   2000  2005 
1万人   近4万 12万以上 

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文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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The prosperous situation of tourism As shown in the graph above, there are 10000 tourists go to travel in1995,while about 40000 tourists in 2000 and beyond 120000 tourists in the year of 2005.According to these statistics,there is a increasing tendency about the number of tourism. In the current decades,there are more and more people to spare their holiday with travel. There are numerous factors accounting for this phenomenon,but the following might be indispensable ones.First and foremost,the level of living is improving continually which offer the support to people to travel around the place they love.Besides,with the development of tourism,the better and better tourism service contribute to people relish travelling.Last but not least,along with the globalization,it is convenient for people to travel all over the world. what a wonderful thing to own a enjoyable tour!However, with the increasing number of tourists,there are some problems we are worth concerning.On the one hand,the crowd of people who will interfere with our good mood.On the other hand, some places and interest are destroyed.In view of these problems,government should execute some effective measures to control the number of tourists.Furthermore,as a tourist ,we ought to shoulder the resposibility to protect the gorgeous view and respect others.

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