广东汕头市2013届高三上学期期末试卷英语作文

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"Whatever happiness or worried can't be sharede with others by 30% students ."said by psychology Poctor.Kelly Lam,which caring about how students concerned about sharing."We teach students, so as to let them know the importance ofsharing,but actuelly we don't make it." the experts said，“It's very important to learn howto share with others in today society,in the meanwhile,it is good for your growth in the future."