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I have a good friend.She is a girl.She is my classmate.She is very tell and beautiful.She has the black long hair and big eyes.She likes playing basketball very much and swiming.She is a terrific girl.Her name was Huang yanan.If you like her too.So call her up.Her phone number is:123456789023.Welcome to go to his house to play