单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;简单句比重太高了;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
My new teacher is my English teacher.Her Chiaese name is Su Lili.Her English name is Kelly.She's young .She's very pretty. She likes swimming,listening to music and playing basketball.Her favourite season is fall.Because she can take a trip.She likes tomatoes and fish . She is my friend.I love her and she love me very much!