增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文章词汇不够丰富,但单词拼写要认真检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
My dog IhaveacutedognamedBell. He is my best friend, beause we always play in the park and he watches TV on the sofa with me every night. Bell has a big pair of black eyes , agile limbs and a smart brain. So my friends all really like it. Doyoulikemy dog? I thinkdogs is the best pet. How do you thin?