2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I think the most beautiful city is Beijing . I have four reasons to support the . First, Beijing is a old city ,and there are many ancient vestiges that will apeal to my foreign friend .I think the their aim to China is to know our beautiful history . So visting Beijing is the best choice and they will learn most knowenge about how did ancient people live in china .There are many glorious constomin in Beijing .Secondly ,beijing is also a place that Chinese people want to go .In beijing they can know diffrient people come from diferient place .