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假设你是某公司销售助理王海，请给David Smith先生写一封回信，内容包括：
1感谢对方订购100箱衬衫；
2建议用纸箱而不用木箱装运，并列举纸箱的优点；你公司最近与别的美国公司交易中也用过纸箱，效果很好；
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Dear David Smith
若增加一些长难句的使用，文章会更好；作者词汇积累很好，不过单词拼写方面要继续努力；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Dear David smith I am writing to extend my thanks for you ordered our 100 T-shirt. we will work harder urder your trust in the past year.we are going to make high quality T-shirt. But when it comes to boxes,I advise you can use pageboxes instead of woofboxes. useing woofboxes is good for environment. as well as,it become get lighter.so,you can save many money.recently,our conmpany also have used pageboxes in trade with other conmpany in USA. I look forward to your reply. yours sincerely wang hai
