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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40892
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分64.5分
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;从句和复杂句用的不错,但部分句子还有一些小问题;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Around us, there are so many people who give their opinion immediately while they are seeing or listening. But unfortunately, it isn't wisdom to get conclusion so quickly. On the one hand, what you are seeing or listening is wrong, maybe the people who talk to you is a liar, at that time he is making a lie to get some purpose, so if you judge by it, you will get a wrong conclusion. On the other hand, what you are seeing or listening may just be a part of the whole thing, if you judge by this, you may make a wrong decision since you have very little information. So every time you make a decision or conclusion, you shouldn't just use the information that you get at that moment, you should talk to different people, search a lot of information, think it twice, then you can get a good result.

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