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字数：300 满分：100分
作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。
It‘s esstensial to save money.There are so many reasons. The first ,as a student,we don't make money and a lot of money that we used comes form our parent.Save money can help our parents cut down their pressure.The second,save money is a good habit,we just buy something that we need.Saved money will help us at some special time.For example,we want to travel in holiday,and the saved money can be used.The last,it can help study attentively.If we will have saved money in semester,our achievement is rich. As I said,save money has a lot of advantage.we will put our attention in our study rather than shopping.we will save time and money.
