2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Nowadays,the number of people using mobile phone ia growing larger and larger.Meanwhile ,there are many problems along with the phone springing up ,which attract our attention very much. they are as follows. First,in my opinion,overusing the phone could hurt our bodies including eyes,head and fingers.Result from staring on the phone all the time,our necks also aches from time to time,which is the foundation of the heavy disease .Meantime our sight get weaker and weaker as well. Second,to my way of think,as we spend too much time on playing the phone,then we do not spare enough time for other things,no sprts and our bodies will get weak ,no communication and our relationships with others could be damaged badly.Our fiends will feel unfamliar with us.Our families must criticize us when we are found playing the phone all the time. Last but not least,there are many false information on the phone coming from the Internet.We could be cheated and misleaded. In a word,we must change our bad habit of overusing the phone.