2011年12月10日雅思写作真题:如何处理人与自然的关系

作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；有效的运用了一些复杂句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

nowadays,people always concern about how do develop the econmy as much as possible but regardless about environment.therefore we have to face to environment problems which have lots of negative effect in our daily life.however,there have two views about what should we do for our planet.some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem the most of them seem we have done much wrong things such as over using fossil resource and producing a great of pollution.the damage which we have caused on the our planet and animals species is permanently,whatever we do is nothing.