作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;文中有几处错误的句子,部分句子偏简单;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
My good friend is a girl that her name is Zhang.She is not only taller than me,but also older than me.I met her at 13 when we went to school to prepare our new school life.She was so kind that when we met at first time we become friends. We have some interests in films and novels.It enhanced our friendship. As time goes,it already 12 years after we know each other.Now we are all got married.But our friendship will go on.