Directions: Present your perspective on one of the issues below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views. “The function of science is to reassure; the purpose of art is to upset. Therein lies the value of each.”
复杂句采用很棒;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
nowadays, science is playing a more and more important fuction in our world , someguys feel that art is useless which will bring upset, however,in my view, art is very significant in our lives. firstly art can improve our faculty of language.reading more novels ,poems and essays can make people eloquent. everyone would like to talk to someone with graceful words and profound intelligence; what's more art can make people more close to life soul when people feel unhappy or grieved, they can read a educated book to enrich their metal wealth and feel better overall, art is really necessary in our lives.