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GRE写作Issue模拟题:The Importance of Science and Art

发布时间:2013-07-19 16:34浏览次数:8499
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Directions: Present your perspective on one of the issues below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views.  “The function of science is to reassure; the purpose of art is to upset. Therein lies the value of each.”

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能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Nowadays, science is playing a more and more vital fuction in our world , someguys feel that art is useless which will bring upset, however,in my view, art is very significant in our lives. Firstly art can improve our language accomplishment. Reading more novels and poems can make people eloquent. Everyone would like to talk to someone with graceful words and profound intelligence; what's more, art can make people more close to life soul when people feel unhappy or grieved, they can read a inspirational book to enrich their spiritual wealth and feel better. Overall, art is really necessary in our lives.

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