2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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During recent years, nothing succeeds without a strong will has aroused widely public attention. There is no doubt that nothing succeeds without a strong will. As we all know strong play an important role in life. For one thing,we will choose give up when we meet difficult if we weak.For another, we will choose presistence when we become strong ,it can help us succeeds.Meanwhile,strong not only show in life but also show in career. Considering the above situation,meansures should be taken to keep strong.First of all,we can choose a challenge thing try in every day. Furthermore, we can choose a good thing presistence to doing.Only in this way,can we susseeds .