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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46206
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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The Importance of Spelling In the picture,a boy is having an interview for his college application.However,according to the interviewer,the boy has spelt the world "COLLEGE" wrong in his essay.Likely,the boy will lose his chance to enter this college because of his bad spelling. With the development of personal computer and occurrence of online chat,people pay less and less attention to their spelling nowadays,without knowing that spelling still plays an important role in formal occasions.For one thing,misspelling can be misleading.As a consequence,the reader may not understand you or even misunderstand the intended meaning.For another,a spelling mistake may be considered as a sign of carelessness.Therefore,you leave a bad impression on the readers and will barely be trusted by them. The way I see it,wu should develop a good habit and pay attention to our spelling all the time.Only in this way can we avoid making trivial mistakes in formal occasions.

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