2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文中如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Nowadays,the Internet is playing a more and more improtant role in our daily live.In other words,it has become a irreplaceable part of people's life.As a result of that,almost people are used to make friends online.Different people have different views about that,and in my opinions,I think it is wise to make friends online. Some people thinks it is not wise to make friends online,but I never agree with that.Why I have the thoughts like that?Here are some of my reasons.First,now people's development cannot without Internet,everyone in today are needed to learn computer.And make friends online is a good way to konw computer.And people's knowledge about Internet can be increased result in that.Second,people's eyesight will be broadened through talking with others online,which contributes to improve their skills of communication.Besides,people will be good to deal with human relationship if they can make friends online in a sensible way. In conclusion,Internet is extremely useful to improve people's ability.And it also very effective to enrich people's experience and it can bring so many benefits to us.So it is wise to make friends online.