作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
There is Chinese proverb saying that it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. What do you think of it? In my opinion, it is wisdom. Considering this scene, if you step into something, your hand may let the basket go, then all the eggs may be broken. It is easy to think about this result. But what the proverb want to say is that we should have backup plans, so that we can reflect to something happen suddenly. Though the meaning about this proverb is obviously, many people can't put it to our life, so you can always find them lose everything, then you will regret. So before you draw a decision, you should think twice about the risk, then make a backup to face up a unexpected situation!