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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10404
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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There is Chinese proverb saying that it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. What do you think of it? In my opinion, it is wisdom. Considering this scene, if you step into something, your hand may let the basket go, then all the eggs may be broken. It is easy to think about this result. But what the proverb want to say is that we should have backup plans, so that we can reflect to something happen suddenly. Though the meaning about this proverb is obviously, many people can't put it to our life, so you can always find them lose everything, then you will regret. So before you draw a decision, you should think twice about the risk, then make a backup to face up a unexpected situation!

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