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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
From : hubin@163.com send to : KPOHsales@hotmail.com Dear Sir / Madam , i have the opportunity to explore your company new product , serial number 5670 at the exhibition held at New York during 15- 22 December and i am very interested on it . I would be very appreciate that if your company can provide us the price list and instruction .Thank you so much for the cooperative and deeply hope that business relationship can be established among us .
