拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
With the passage of time,now people's standard of living is higher than the past.So now many people are not pay special attention to save money,especially for students.Actually,saving money is a good habit,and it is more useful for people than using tomorrow's money today. The reason why I think saving money is better than using tomorrow money today is that save money will be functional in our daily live.And here are some of my views. To begin with,saving money is a good habit,which contributes to build a good character and have a correct value.All of these factors will set a stage for one's success in the future.Furthermore,everything in the world is changing,nobody can exactly predict what will happen in the next minute.So it is necessary to raise money for a raining day.The troubles in people's life will be reduced if he or she have a plan B in anytime.Saving money will be very useful for someone's development. All in all,saving money can bring so many benefits to us,and it's will be easier to reach our goals if all us can trying to have it.