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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5942
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分52.0分
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,请增加词汇量的积累;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;可以适当增加副词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Living in the rural area is better than living in the city. First, the rural area has a better air quality than the city, which mean a better living condition.It will be great for our health. Second, the rural area has organic food which have a good nutrition and quality. In addtion to the food, you can admire the beauty of true nature. The last, the rural area has a very much better traffic than the city, you don't have to endure the suffering while you are waiting.

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