2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦107:李军

希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是学术词汇的积累；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

Li Jun is fifteen years old. He has been in No. 1 Middle School for two years. He studies hard. He is helpful.He often helps the blind and old people cross the road. He is imaginative enough to come up with many good ideas. He is generous and actively joins in all kinds of charity activities. Last year he donated money to charities. He hopes he can help more people in need.