要求:
1. 语句通顺,书写规范。
2. 文章必须包括所有内容要点,第4点可适当发挥2-3句。3. 词数80左右,文章开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Dear agony aunt, I’m a Grade 9 student. These days I have some problems, and I don’t know how to deal with them. First, I have much homework every day and often stay up late. So I always feel tired. Second, I like watching films, but I don’t know how to achieve a balance between study and play. I feel stressed at times. Once I dreamed to become a policeman when I grew up. But I don’t know what to do and what not to do. What’s worse, parents care only about the marks. We seldom communicate with each other. Can you offer me some suggestions? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Daniel