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Some people think all children learn history in school is important. Some others think learning subjects more relevant to life is important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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It is known that people hold different views about how to choose the school curriculum Design. Someones agree with that learning history is important, while in another opinions the others think that it is necessary to children to learning practical subjects about life. In my view, for the first opinion it is quite concerned about cultrue heritage and it helps people proceed further and better through the historical lessons. however, I think the second is more realistic and helpful to children's growing up. And then, I will give my arguments in this paragraph. firstly, Children do not have much exprience, so they may not understand some histories and their deep meanings. such as first world war or second world war are entiled too much things that they cannot fully understand. secondly according to some expert's opinions the first task of children is growing up as soon as possible, Therefore children like to do the same things that their parents or other adults did. Teaching them with practical training in life is very beneficial for them. To sum up, the first importand things children should learn in a school may include subjects refered to real life and learning history could be a good supplement.
